Essay writing (Q4, 12 marks)
Q4 asks for a 250-300 word essay on one of two topics, each with an outline, for 12 marks. This unit shows what the marks reward, how to choose and plan in 4 minutes, the structure of every paragraph, the moves of descriptive, argumentative and discursive essays, and banks of linking words, phrases and safe quotations. It ends with full-mark model essays for every 2026 and model-paper topic, 40 likely topics, and report writing for the old-syllabus Q6.
Learning outcomes (7)
- Write a multi-paragraph descriptive or argumentative essay of about 250-300 words by expanding a given outline, using the mechanics of correct writing (E-12-D3-01).
- Write a descriptive composition giving the physical description and characteristics of a person, object or place, moving from general to specific (E-12-D3-05).
- Write arguments to support claims with valid reasoning and relevant evidence, fairly presenting counterclaims, in a formal style with a concluding statement (E-12-D3-04).
- Produce clear and coherent writing whose development, organisation and style suit the task, purpose and audience (E-12-D2-01).
- Plan and write a first draft with sufficient detail, then proofread and edit it (E-12-D2-03).
- Use hooks and lead-in sentences, and make each paragraph develop the main idea through its topic sentence (E-12-D2-04).
- Old syllabus: write a formal report on a given situation covering the given aspects.
Q4 at a glance: what the 12 marks rewardOften examined
Q4 is the only free-writing question of Section C, and at 12 marks it is the biggest single question in the section. The paper gives two topics, each with an outline (a list of points to cover). You write an essay of about 250-300 words on ONE of them.
The FBISE Assessment Framework describes Q4 like this: a multi-paragraph descriptive or argumentative essay of about 250-300 words, written by expanding the given outline, using correct language mechanics; the essay should be coherent and cohesive and show accuracy in grammar, syntax and vocabulary. The marks are split 4+4+4 across knowledge, understanding and application.
| Criterion | What the examiner checks | How you earn it |
|---|---|---|
| Content and relevance to the outline | Every outline point is covered, in the printed order. Ideas stay on the topic. Points are supported with real examples. | One paragraph (or one clear part of a paragraph) for each outline point. A Pakistani example or fact in every body paragraph. |
| Organisation | A title, an introduction with a thesis, body paragraphs and a conclusion. Clear paragraph breaks. | Use the plan in this unit: title, introduction, 3 to 5 body paragraphs, conclusion. Leave a line between paragraphs. |
| Coherence and cohesion | Coherence: ideas follow a logical order. Cohesion: sentences and paragraphs are joined by linking words and reference words. | Start each paragraph with a topic sentence. Use linking words (However, Moreover, As a result). End a paragraph with a sentence that closes it or leads to the next. |
| Grammar and vocabulary | Correct tenses, subject-verb agreement, articles and sentence structure. Formal, precise words. | Write short, correct sentences (12 to 20 words). Use the phrase bank. No slang. |
| Mechanics | Spelling, punctuation, capital letters, legible handwriting. | Keep 3 minutes to check. No contractions. Copy the outline words with correct spelling. |
Time plan
Sections B and C together have 155 minutes for 80 marks, which is about 2 minutes per mark. Q4 is worth 12 marks, so give it about 30 minutes.
| Step | Minutes | What you do |
|---|---|---|
| Choose | 1 | Read both topics and both outlines. Pick the one you can cover point by point. |
| Plan | 3 | Turn each outline point into a paragraph point with one example. Choose a hook and write the thesis in a few words. |
| Write | 22 | Title, introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion. One outline point after another. |
| Check | 3 to 4 | Spelling, agreement, articles, full stops, capital letters, contractions, every outline point present. |
Choosing the topic in 1 minuteOften examined
You have one minute to choose. Choose with your head, not your heart: the better topic is the one whose outline you can cover, not the one whose title sounds more interesting.
- Read both titles and both outlines to the end.
- For each outline point, ask: can I write 2 to 3 sentences on it, with one example? Count the "yes" answers for each topic.
- Pick the topic with more "yes" answers. If they are equal, pick the type you have practised more (descriptive or argumentative).
- Check that you know a real Pakistani example, place or fact for the body paragraphs.
- Decide and do not change. Switching topics after writing a paragraph costs 5 to 8 minutes.
| Paper | Topic 1 (type) | Topic 2 (type) |
|---|---|---|
| 2026 Set B | Youth Unemployment (argumentative) | The Most Historic Place I Have Visited (descriptive) |
| 2026 Set D | Women Empowerment (argumentative) | The Most Beautiful Place on Earth (descriptive) |
| 2026 Set A | Digital Literacy and Economic Empowerment (discursive) | Drug Addiction among Youth (argumentative) |
| 2026 old syllabus | The Role of Education in National Progress (argumentative) | Rural vs Urban Life (discursive) |
| Model paper (2025) | My Native Town (descriptive) | Uses and Abuses of Artificial Intelligence (discursive) |
Planning in 3 minutesOften examined
A plan is a short list of what each paragraph will say. Three minutes of planning saves you from missing an outline point, repeating ideas or running out of things to say. Write it in the margin or on the last page of the answer sheet, then draw one neat line through it when you finish.
- Copy the outline points as a numbered list, in the printed order.
- Group them into paragraphs (usually 5; 4 to 6 is fine). Join two neighbouring points only when the outline is long, and never change their order.
- Beside each paragraph, write its paragraph point: your main idea in 3 to 6 words. This becomes the topic sentence.
- Add one Pakistani example, fact, place or name for each body paragraph.
- Choose a hook (fact, statement, short quotation or anecdote) and write the thesis in a few words.
- Jot down 3 or 4 strong phrases or linking words you will use.
| Outline point | Paragraph | Paragraph point | Example or fact |
|---|---|---|---|
| What is unemployment? | 1 Introduction | Definition; youth unemployment is a serious national challenge (thesis) | Graduates with degrees but no jobs (hook) |
| Current conditions of youth | 2 Body | Young, but jobless or under-employed | Nearly two-thirds of Pakistanis are under 30 |
| Areas where youth are struggling | 3 Body | Jobs, skills, villages, young women | Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly |
| Causes of youth unemployment | 4 Body | Degrees without skills; slow growth; nepotism | Gap between syllabus and job market |
| Measures required | 5 Body | Skills, freelancing, loans, merit | NAVTTC, DigiSkills |
| Future prospects | 6 Conclusion | Bright if energy is directed | Iqbal: "Sitaron se aage jahan aur bhi hain" |
Six outline points give six paragraphs of about 50 words each. The full essay is in the past-paper section of this unit.
The structure of a 250-300 word essayOften examined
Every Q4 essay has the same skeleton: a title, an introduction, usually three body paragraphs (more when the outline is longer) and a conclusion. Learn the job of each part and the essay almost writes itself.
Title
- Write the topic exactly as printed, with capital letters for the main words, on the first line in the middle.
- No quotation marks, no underlining and no decoration are needed.
- Do not invent a new title. If the topic is "The Most Historic Place I Have Visited", keep it and name the place in the first paragraph.
Introduction (about 50 to 60 words, 3 to 4 sentences)
The introduction has three parts in this order: a hook (the opening sentence that catches the reader's interest), background (a definition or the context of the topic) and the thesis (one sentence that states the main idea or your position). The thesis is always the last sentence of the introduction.
| Hook type | How it works | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Striking fact | A true, surprising number or event | According to a UNODC survey published in 2013, about 6.7 million Pakistanis use drugs. |
| Statement (not a question) | A bold, clear sentence that makes a point | Some places are made of stone, yet they speak like books. |
| Short quotation | A well-known line, correctly attributed (see the quotations bank) | Nelson Mandela called education "the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world." |
| Anecdote | A true-to-life mini-story of one or two sentences | Last Eid, my cousin, a computer science graduate, was still sending job applications two years after his degree. |
- Thesis statement
- One sentence at the end of the introduction that states the main idea of the whole essay or your position on the topic. Example: "Youth unemployment is, therefore, one of the most serious challenges facing Pakistan today."
- Background
- One or two sentences between the hook and the thesis that define the key term or give the context, so that any reader can follow the essay.
Every year, thousands of young Pakistanis leave universities with degrees in their hands, but many cannot find work. Unemployment is a condition in which a person who is able and willing to work cannot find a job. When the young are unemployed, a nation wastes its greatest asset. Youth unemployment is, therefore, one of the most serious challenges facing Pakistan today.
| Sentence | Part | Why it works |
|---|---|---|
| Every year, thousands of young Pakistanis ... | Hook (statement) | A clear picture from Pakistani life |
| Unemployment is a condition in which ... | Background (definition) | Answers the first outline point, "What is unemployment?" |
| When the young are unemployed ... | Background (context) | Explains why the topic matters |
| Youth unemployment is, therefore, ... | Thesis | States the main idea in the last sentence |
Body paragraphs (about 55 to 70 words each)
Each body paragraph develops one outline point. Build it in four steps:
| Part | Its job | Example (The Role of Education in National Progress, outline point: Teacher and civilization) |
|---|---|---|
| Topic sentence | States the paragraph's main idea using the outline's words | Teachers are the architects of civilization. |
| Explanation | One or two sentences that explain the idea | Just as a builder shapes bricks into a building, a teacher shapes young minds into responsible citizens. |
| Example | Evidence: a fact, place, name or event, from Pakistan where possible | Great civilizations, from Baghdad in the age of the Abbasids to modern Europe, rose on the work of scholars and teachers. |
| Linking sentence | Closes the idea or leads to the next paragraph | When teachers are respected and well trained, society flourishes. |
Conclusion (about 40 to 50 words, 2 to 3 sentences)
- Restate the thesis in new words. Begin with "In conclusion," or "To sum up,". Do not copy the thesis word for word.
- Give a solution or a hope for the future. Many outlines end with "Future Prospects"; this is where they go.
- End with a strong last line: a short, memorable sentence, a quotation or a call to action. Example: "An empowered woman builds an empowered nation."
How many paragraphs and how many words
A paragraph is a group of sentences about one main idea. For a 300-word essay, 5 paragraphs is the safe default. 4 to 6 paragraphs are all acceptable; the outline decides.
| Paragraph | Words | Sentences |
|---|---|---|
| Introduction | 50 to 60 | 3 to 4 |
| Body paragraph 1 | 55 to 70 | 4 to 5 |
| Body paragraph 2 | 55 to 70 | 4 to 5 |
| Body paragraph 3 | 55 to 70 | 4 to 5 |
| Conclusion | 40 to 50 | 2 to 3 |
| Total | about 280 to 310 | 18 to 22 |
| Outline has | Paragraphs | What to do |
|---|---|---|
| 4 points | 5 | Introduction plus one paragraph per point, or split the richest point in two |
| 5 points | 5 | One paragraph per point (the first point is the introduction, the last is the conclusion) |
| 6 points | 6 | One paragraph per point, about 50 words each |
| 7 points | 6 (or 7 short ones) | Join two neighbouring points in one paragraph, keeping the order; or write 7 short paragraphs of about 40 words |
| 8 or more points | 6 | Join neighbouring points; every point must still appear by name |
Descriptive, argumentative and discursive essaysOften examined
The framework names two types for Q4, descriptive and argumentative. Many topics ("Uses and Abuses of AI", "Rural vs Urban Life") are really discursive: they ask you to look at both sides. Narrative essays (stories) are not assessed at HSSC level, according to the framework.
- Descriptive essay
- An essay that paints a picture of a place, person, object or event, using sensory details and moving from general to specific.
- Argumentative essay
- An essay that takes a clear position (a claim) on an issue and supports it with reasons and evidence, answering the opposing view.
- Discursive essay
- An essay that discusses an issue from more than one side in a balanced way and gives a reasoned view at the end.
| Descriptive | Argumentative | Discursive | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Purpose | Show the reader what something is like | Persuade the reader of one position | Explain and weigh both sides |
| 2026 and model topics | Historic place, beautiful place, my native town | Youth unemployment, women empowerment, drug addiction, education and progress | Digital literacy, rural vs urban life, uses and abuses of AI |
| Person | "I" is natural, especially in Personal Experience/Feelings | Mostly third person; "In my view" once in the thesis or conclusion | Third person; your view at the end |
| Tense | Present for lasting features; past for your visit | Present | Present |
| Key moves | Sensory details, general to specific, feelings | Claim, reasons, evidence, counterclaim, rebuttal | Both sides, fair evidence, balanced conclusion |
Descriptive moves
General to specific. The framework asks for description "moving from general to specific": start with where the place is and what it is (general), then its main features, then small details, then your feelings. In the place outline this is already built in: General Description, then Physical Features, then Atmosphere, then Personal Experience.
| Sense | Useful words | Example sentence |
|---|---|---|
| Sight | towering, snow-capped, turquoise, sparkling, lush, majestic | Snow-capped peaks tower over green fields and orchards. |
| Sound | rustle, murmur, chirping, echo, silence | The silence is broken only by the sound of water and birds. |
| Smell | fragrance, aroma, fresh, earthy | The earthy smell of the first rain rises from the fields. |
| Touch | crisp, cool, rough, smooth, chilly | A cool breeze blows through the old courtyards. |
| Taste | sweet, spicy, tangy | We ate hot pakoras beside the cold, clear stream. |
Argumentative moves
- Claim
- Your position, stated in the thesis. "In my view, social media is a blessing, provided it is used wisely."
- Reason
- Why the claim is true; each reason is a topic sentence. "Social media has many uses."
- Evidence
- Facts, examples, figures or quotations that support a reason. "During floods and emergencies, social media spreads information and collects donations quickly."
- Counterclaim
- The opposing view, stated fairly. "Critics argue that social media should be banned for young people."
- Rebuttal
- Your answer to the counterclaim, showing why it is weaker. "This argument, however, ignores the fact that the fault lies in misuse, not in the tool itself."
Critics argue that social media should be banned for young people because its dangers outweigh its benefits. This argument, however, ignores the fact that the fault lies in misuse, not in the tool itself. A knife can cut vegetables or hurt someone; we do not ban knives but teach people to use them safely.
- Sentence 1 states the counterclaim fairly ("Critics argue that ...").
- Sentence 2 rebuts it with a reason ("This argument, however, ignores the fact that ...").
- Sentence 3 adds an example (the knife comparison) that makes the rebuttal convincing.
Discursive moves
- Give each side its own paragraph (for example uses, then abuses), in the order of the outline.
- Use contrast signals between the sides: "On the other hand", "However", "In contrast".
- Keep the tone fair: no insults, no exaggeration.
- In the conclusion, give a balanced view or a solution: "AI is neither a blessing nor a curse in itself; everything depends on how we use it."
Following the outlineOften examined
The outline is the examiner's checklist. Content marks depend on how fully and how faithfully you expand it.
- Cover every point. A missing point is missing content.
- Keep the printed order. The outline is the order of your paragraphs.
- Use the outline's words as paragraph anchors. Put the key words of each point in the topic sentence, so the examiner can see at a glance that the point is covered.
- Answer question points as statements. "What is unemployment?" becomes "Unemployment is a condition in which ...". "Why people move to cities?" becomes "People move to cities for several reasons."
- Cover every item in a listed point, in order. "Areas where women are struggling: education, financial independence, health and politics" needs at least one sentence on each of the four.
- Treat "etc." in the outline as permission to add one more example. Never copy "etc." into the essay.
- "Conclusion/Future Prospects" means the conclusion must look forward, not only sum up.
| Outline point | Topic sentence in the model essay |
|---|---|
| What is empowerment | Empowerment means giving people the power and resources to make decisions about their own lives. |
| Current conditions of women | The current conditions of women present a mixed picture. |
| Areas where women are struggling: education, financial independence | Women are struggling in several areas. In education, ... In terms of financial independence, ... |
| ... health and politics | Health is another area of concern. ... In politics, ... |
| Measures required to restore women to a respectable status | Several measures are required to restore women to a respectable status. |
| Future prospects | The future prospects are encouraging. |
Linking words bankOften examined
Linking words (transitional devices) show how one idea relates to the next. They create cohesion, one of the things the essay is marked for, and the same words are tested in Q7.
| Function | Linking words | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Addition | Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, Besides, Also, Not only ... but also | Moreover, young women face extra barriers. |
| Contrast | However, On the other hand, In contrast, Nevertheless, Yet, Whereas, While | On the other hand, AI brings serious dangers. |
| Concession | Although, Even though, Admittedly, Despite, In spite of | Although sixty seats are reserved for women, few women hold real power. |
| Cause | Because, Since, As, Due to, Owing to | Many girls leave school early because of poverty. |
| Effect or result | Therefore, As a result, Consequently, Thus, Hence, So | As a result, frustration is spreading among the youth. |
| Example | For example, For instance, Such as, In particular, Like | Programmes such as DigiSkills train young people. |
| Sequence | Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally, Then, Next | Firstly, they cannot find jobs that match their degrees. |
| Time | Nowadays, In recent years, At present, Once, Later, In the future | In recent years, freelancing has grown rapidly. |
| Emphasis | Indeed, In fact, Above all, Most importantly, Certainly | Above all, merit must be the only standard in recruitment. |
| Comparison | Similarly, Likewise, In the same way, Just as | Just as a builder shapes bricks, a teacher shapes minds. |
| Condition | If, Unless, Provided that, As long as | Social media is a blessing, provided it is used wisely. |
| Conclusion | In conclusion, To sum up, In short, All in all, In a nutshell | In conclusion, education is the backbone of national progress. |
Linking between paragraphs
The first words of a body paragraph should connect it to the one before. Examples from the model essays: "Once the gap is closed, the global marketplace opens its doors." "However, it has harmful effects too." "Yet rural life has its own attraction." "These concerns can be addressed with wise planning."
60 high-value phrases and vocabularyOften examined
These phrases make an essay sound mature and formal. Learn them in groups, and use four or five in each essay: more than that sounds forced.
| # | Use | Phrase | Example |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Opening | It is an undeniable fact that ... | It is an undeniable fact that education shapes the destiny of nations. |
| 2 | Opening | ... has become a burning issue | In recent years, inflation has become a burning issue in Pakistan. |
| 3 | Opening | one of the most pressing challenges of our time | Climate change is one of the most pressing challenges of our time. |
| 4 | Opening | At the heart of this issue lies ... | At the heart of this issue lies the lack of skills. |
| 5 | Opening | a double-edged sword | Technology is a double-edged sword. |
| 6 | Opening | Few things have changed our lives as rapidly as ... | Few things have changed our lives as rapidly as the smartphone. |
| 7 | Opening | plays a pivotal role in | Education plays a pivotal role in national progress. |
| 8 | Opening | is the backbone of | Agriculture is the backbone of Pakistan's economy. |
| 9 | Importance | cannot be overemphasised | The importance of clean water cannot be overemphasised. |
| 10 | Importance | is of paramount importance | Road safety is of paramount importance in big cities. |
| 11 | Importance | lays the foundation of | Primary education lays the foundation of a child's future. |
| 12 | Importance | is the need of the hour | Tree plantation is the need of the hour. |
| 13 | Importance | the key to prosperity | Digital skills are the key to prosperity. |
| 14 | Importance | an indispensable part of | The mobile phone has become an indispensable part of life. |
| 15 | Cause | stems from | Corruption stems from greed and weak accountability. |
| 16 | Cause | is largely attributed to | The rise in prices is largely attributed to hoarding. |
| 17 | Cause | is rooted in | Child labour is rooted in poverty. |
| 18 | Cause | is fuelled by | Unemployment is fuelled by rapid population growth. |
| 19 | Cause | The root cause of ... is ... | The root cause of load-shedding is poor planning. |
| 20 | Cause | a combination of factors such as | Smog is caused by a combination of factors such as crop burning and vehicle smoke. |
| 21 | Effect | gives rise to | Unemployment gives rise to crime. |
| 22 | Effect | has far-reaching consequences | Deforestation has far-reaching consequences. |
| 23 | Effect | takes a heavy toll on | Addiction takes a heavy toll on health. |
| 24 | Effect | adversely affects | Noise pollution adversely affects students' concentration. |
| 25 | Effect | has a detrimental effect on | Excessive screen time has a detrimental effect on sleep. |
| 26 | Effect | paves the way for | Education paves the way for progress. |
| 27 | Effect | is a major contributing factor to | Overpopulation is a major contributing factor to poverty. |
| 28 | Argument | On the one hand ..., on the other hand ... | On the one hand, cities offer jobs; on the other hand, they are crowded. |
| 29 | Argument | It is often argued that ... | It is often argued that books are no longer needed. |
| 30 | Argument | Critics claim that ...; however, ... | Critics claim that AI will destroy jobs; however, it will also create new ones. |
| 31 | Argument | While it is true that ..., it is also true that ... | While it is true that social media wastes time, it is also true that it spreads knowledge. |
| 32 | Argument | This argument ignores the fact that ... | This argument ignores the fact that misuse, not the tool, is the problem. |
| 33 | Argument | There is no denying that ... | There is no denying that tourism creates jobs. |
| 34 | Argument | Admittedly, ... | Admittedly, dams are expensive to build. |
| 35 | Argument | In the light of these facts, ... | In the light of these facts, reform cannot be delayed. |
| 36 | Solution | Concrete steps must be taken to ... | Concrete steps must be taken to control inflation. |
| 37 | Solution | at the grassroots level | Awareness must be spread at the grassroots level. |
| 38 | Solution | strict implementation of laws | Strict implementation of laws can reduce road accidents. |
| 39 | Solution | public awareness campaigns | Public awareness campaigns can reduce water wastage. |
| 40 | Solution | a joint effort of the government and the people | Cleanliness needs a joint effort of the government and the people. |
| 41 | Solution | on a war footing | The water crisis must be tackled on a war footing. |
| 42 | Solution | nip the evil in the bud | Parents can nip the evil of drug abuse in the bud. |
| 43 | Solution | It is high time that ... (+ past tense) | It is high time that we planted more trees. |
| 44 | Solution | a comprehensive strategy | Pakistan needs a comprehensive strategy for population control. |
| 45 | Description | breathtaking scenery | The Neelum Valley is famous for its breathtaking scenery. |
| 46 | Description | snow-capped peaks | Snow-capped peaks surround the valley. |
| 47 | Description | lush green valleys | Swat is known for its lush green valleys. |
| 48 | Description | crystal-clear streams | Crystal-clear streams flow past the village. |
| 49 | Description | a feast for the eyes | The spring blossoms are a feast for the eyes. |
| 50 | Description | steeped in history | Lahore is a city steeped in history. |
| 51 | Description | bustling bazaars | The bustling bazaars of Peshawar never sleep. |
| 52 | Description | an architectural masterpiece | The Badshahi Mosque is an architectural masterpiece. |
| 53 | Conclusion | In a nutshell, ... | In a nutshell, corruption is the mother of all evils. |
| 54 | Conclusion | To sum up, ... | To sum up, sports build both body and character. |
| 55 | Conclusion | All things considered, ... | All things considered, the benefits of technology outweigh its harms. |
| 56 | Conclusion | If we act now, ... | If we act now, we can save our rivers. |
| 57 | Conclusion | Only then can we ... | Only then can we build a prosperous Pakistan. |
| 58 | Conclusion | The future belongs to those who ... | The future belongs to those who prepare for it today. |
| 59 | Conclusion | a brighter and more prosperous Pakistan | Educated youth will build a brighter and more prosperous Pakistan. |
| 60 | Conclusion | The choice is ours. | We can waste water or save it. The choice is ours. |
Formal word upgrades
| Weak or informal | Formal choice |
|---|---|
| a lot of, lots of | many, much, a large number of, a great deal of |
| big | large, huge, significant, major |
| good | beneficial, valuable, excellent, positive |
| bad | harmful, damaging, serious, negative |
| get | obtain, receive, gain, achieve |
| kids | children |
| guys | people, young men |
| stuff, things | items, materials, factors, issues |
| so (at the start of a sentence) | Therefore, As a result |
| show | demonstrate, reveal, highlight |
| help | assist, support, enable |
| very important | vital, essential, crucial |
| very big problem | serious problem, grave issue |
| nowadays everyone | in recent years, many people |
| OK | acceptable, satisfactory |
Quotations bank
A short, correct quotation makes a strong hook or last line. A wrong one does harm: an examiner who knows the real words, or the real speaker, will mark you down. These 15 are well known and correctly attributed. Where the exact words differ between sources, the last column says so.
| # | Quotation | By | Use for | Wording |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | "Indeed, Allah will not change the condition of a people until they change what is in themselves." | The Holy Quran, Surah Ar-Ra'd (13:11) | national progress, corruption, youth, any reform | English translations vary slightly |
| 2 | "Seeking knowledge is an obligation upon every Muslim." | The Holy Prophet (PBUH), hadith in Sunan Ibn Majah | education, reading, digital literacy, female education | Translations vary slightly |
| 3 | "No nation can rise to the height of glory unless your women are side by side with you." | Quaid-e-Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah, speech at Aligarh, 1944 | women empowerment, female education | Quoted this way in most books |
| 4 | "With faith, discipline and selfless devotion to duty, there is nothing worthwhile that you cannot achieve." | Quaid-e-Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah | youth, national progress, discipline, success | Wording varies slightly in different sources |
| 5 | "Khudi ko kar buland itna ke har taqdeer se pehle, Khuda bande se khud pooche, bata teri raza kya hai." (Raise yourself so high that before every decree of fate, God Himself asks you what you wish.) | Allama Muhammad Iqbal, Bal-e-Jibril | youth, self-reliance, success | Urdu fixed; the English translation varies |
| 6 | "Sitaron se aage jahan aur bhi hain." (There are worlds beyond the stars.) | Allama Muhammad Iqbal, Bal-e-Jibril | youth, ambition, science and technology | Urdu fixed; the English translation varies |
| 7 | "Wujood-e-zan se hai tasveer-e-kainat mein rang." (The picture of the universe owes its colour to woman.) | Allama Muhammad Iqbal, Zarb-e-Kalim | women empowerment | Urdu fixed; the English translation varies |
| 8 | "Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world." | Nelson Mandela, speech in 2003 | education, national progress | Exact |
| 9 | "One child, one teacher, one book and one pen can change the world." | Malala Yousafzai, speech at the United Nations, 2013 | education, female education, youth | Exact |
| 10 | "When the well's dry, we know the worth of water." | Benjamin Franklin, Poor Richard's Almanack | water crisis, conservation | Exact (old spelling: "Well's", "Worth of Water") |
| 11 | "Lost time is never found again." | Benjamin Franklin, Poor Richard's Almanack | time management, youth, discipline | Exact |
| 12 | "A thing of beauty is a joy for ever." | John Keats, Endymion | beautiful place, tourism, nature | Exact ("for ever" as two words in the poem) |
| 13 | "Reading maketh a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man." | Francis Bacon, Of Studies | reading habit, libraries, education | Exact (old English "maketh") |
| 14 | "The development of full artificial intelligence could spell the end of the human race." | Stephen Hawking, BBC interview, 2014 | AI, technology, science | Exact |
| 15 | "The earth provides enough to satisfy every man's need, but not every man's greed." | Mahatma Gandhi | climate change, corruption, water, environment | Wording varies; reported by others, not written by Gandhi himself |
Mistakes that cost marksOften examined
| Mistake | Example | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Off-topic writing | In "Digital Literacy and Economic Empowerment", a paragraph on the history of computers | Every paragraph must serve an outline point; ask "which point is this?" |
| Too long an introduction | 120 words of general talk before the topic is named | 50 to 60 words: hook, background, thesis. Start the first body point by line 6 or 7. |
| No paragraphs | One solid block of 300 words | One outline point per paragraph; leave a line between paragraphs. |
| Memorised essay that ignores the outline | A crammed "Drug Addiction" essay with no "Impact on Education and Career" | Rebuild the essay around the printed outline; use memorised lines only as material. |
| Informal words | kids, guys, a lot of, stuff, gonna, super | children, young people, many, things, going to, very |
| Contractions | don't, can't, it's, won't, they're | do not, cannot, it is, will not, they are |
| "etc." | Pollution, traffic, noise etc. are problems. | Name the items, or end with "and other problems" / "such as". |
| Rhetorical questions | Why do we not plant trees? Are we blind? | Write statements: "We must plant more trees." |
| Outline points written as a list | Causes: 1. peer pressure 2. stress | Write full sentences inside paragraphs. |
| Wrong facts or invented figures | "Pakistan has 90 percent literacy." | Use a figure only if you are sure; otherwise write "a large number" or "many". |
| Very long sentences | One sentence running over four lines with "and ... and ... and" | Two or three shorter sentences joined by linking words. |
| Emotional or exaggerated tone | The whole nation is doomed and nothing can ever be done. | A calm, formal tone with reasons. |
| Ending badly | The End. / Thank you. / a new argument in the last line | A restated thesis, a hope or solution, a strong last line. |
Presentation on the answer sheet
- Headings are not needed. Write the title once at the top. Do not write "Introduction", "Body" or "Conclusion" above paragraphs: the paragraphs themselves should show the structure.
- Neat paragraphs. Indent the first line or leave one blank line between paragraphs. Keep the left margin straight.
- Underlining is not needed. Underlining key phrases, using coloured pens or drawing borders earns no marks and wastes time.
- Legible handwriting, with clear capital letters and full stops.
- Corrections: draw one neat line through a mistake and write the correction after it. Do not scribble.
- Question number: write "Q.4" and the topic title so the examiner knows which topic you chose.
- Writing the word count at the end is not required.
40 likely topics with outlinesOften examined
FBISE topics follow the framework's themes: youth, digital media and AI, the Sustainable Development Goals (education, gender equality, health, water, climate, decent work), drug education, soft skills, nature, and travel and tourism. These 40 topics cover them. Practise planning each in 3 minutes, then write at least five in full.
| # | Theme | Topic | Type | Outline |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Youth and society | The Role of Youth in Nation Building | Argumentative | Introduction ... youth as the strength of a nation ... role in education, economy and politics ... problems faced by youth ... how youth can serve Pakistan ... conclusion |
| 2 | Youth and society | Brain Drain from Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction and meaning ... causes (jobs, pay, merit, security) ... effects on the country ... benefits (remittances) ... how to stop it ... conclusion |
| 3 | Youth and society | Discipline in Student Life | Argumentative | Introduction ... meaning of discipline ... discipline in studies, time and conduct ... role of parents and teachers ... results of indiscipline ... conclusion |
| 4 | Youth and society | Time Management | Argumentative | Introduction ... value of time in Islam and life ... ways of wasting time ... how to manage time ... benefits of good time management ... conclusion |
| 5 | Youth and society | Stress among Students | Argumentative | Introduction ... causes (exams, expectations, social media) ... effects on health and studies ... ways to manage stress ... role of family and school ... conclusion |
| 6 | Youth and society | Patriotism | Argumentative | Introduction and meaning ... examples from the Pakistan Movement ... duties of a patriot ... patriotism in daily life ... false patriotism ... conclusion |
| 7 | Technology | Science and Technology: A Blessing or a Curse | Discursive | Introduction ... blessings in medicine, communication and travel ... curses: weapons, pollution, addiction ... responsible use ... conclusion |
| 8 | Technology | Artificial Intelligence in Education | Discursive | Introduction ... AI tutors and personalised learning ... help for teachers ... risks: cheating, dependence, privacy ... guidelines for students ... conclusion |
| 9 | Technology | Social Media: Uses and Abuses | Argumentative | Introduction ... uses: communication, learning, business ... abuses: fake news, time waste, cyberbullying ... views of critics ... responsible use ... conclusion |
| 10 | Technology | The Mobile Phone: A Blessing or a Curse | Discursive | Introduction ... uses in daily life ... benefits for students ... harmful effects on health and studies ... sensible use ... conclusion |
| 11 | Technology | Online Learning versus Classroom Learning | Discursive | Introduction ... advantages of online learning ... problems (internet, discipline) ... strengths of classroom learning ... blended learning ... conclusion |
| 12 | Technology | Freelancing: A New Career for Pakistani Youth | Argumentative | Introduction ... what freelancing is ... skills in demand ... benefits for youth and economy ... problems (payments, internet) ... government support ... conclusion |
| 13 | Technology | Cybercrime and Cyberbullying | Argumentative | Introduction ... forms of cybercrime ... effects on victims ... laws in Pakistan (PECA 2016) ... how to stay safe online ... conclusion |
| 14 | Technology | E-commerce in Pakistan | Discursive | Introduction ... growth of online shopping ... benefits for small businesses and women ... problems (trust, fraud, delivery) ... future prospects ... conclusion |
| 15 | Environment | Climate Change and Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction ... causes ... effects on Pakistan (floods, heatwaves, glaciers) ... measures ... conclusion |
| 16 | Environment | Water Crisis in Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction ... causes ... effects ... solutions (dams, irrigation, conservation) ... conclusion |
| 17 | Environment | Smog and Air Pollution in Our Cities | Argumentative | Introduction ... what smog is ... causes (vehicles, industry, crop burning) ... effects on health and life ... remedies ... conclusion |
| 18 | Environment | Importance of Trees / Deforestation | Argumentative | Introduction ... benefits of trees ... causes of deforestation ... effects ... tree-planting campaigns ... role of citizens ... conclusion |
| 19 | Environment | Energy Crisis in Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction ... load-shedding and its effects ... causes ... renewable energy (solar, wind, hydel) ... saving energy ... conclusion |
| 20 | Social issues | Population Explosion | Argumentative | Introduction ... present situation ... causes ... effects on resources, jobs and services ... measures ... conclusion |
| 21 | Social issues | Inflation in Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction and meaning ... causes ... effects on the poor and middle class ... hoarding and profiteering ... remedies ... conclusion |
| 22 | Social issues | Unemployment in Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction ... types and present situation ... causes ... effects on society ... solutions ... future prospects |
| 23 | Social issues | Corruption | Argumentative | Definition ... forms of corruption ... causes ... effects on the nation ... teachings of Islam ... strict laws and reforms ... conclusion |
| 24 | Social issues | Child Labour | Argumentative | Introduction ... where children work ... causes (poverty, illiteracy) ... effects on children ... laws and solutions ... conclusion |
| 25 | Social issues | Poverty in Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction ... causes ... effects ... government programmes (BISP) ... role of charity and skills ... conclusion |
| 26 | Social issues | Road Safety | Argumentative | Introduction ... causes of road accidents ... effects ... traffic rules ... role of police, drivers and pedestrians ... conclusion |
| 27 | Social issues | Smoking and Vaping among Students | Argumentative | Introduction ... reasons students start ... health effects ... myths about vaping ... prevention ... conclusion |
| 28 | Social issues | The Examination System in Pakistan | Argumentative | Introduction ... purpose of exams ... flaws: cramming, cheating, stress ... reforms (conceptual papers, SLO-based assessment) ... conclusion |
| 29 | Education and women | Female Education | Argumentative | Introduction ... importance in Islam ... present condition ... hurdles ... benefits to family and nation ... measures ... conclusion |
| 30 | Education and women | The Role of Women in Pakistan's Development | Argumentative | Introduction ... women in the Pakistan Movement ... women in education, health, business and politics ... problems ... way forward ... conclusion |
| 31 | Education and women | The Habit of Reading | Argumentative | Introduction ... increases knowledge ... broadens vision ... positive use of time ... books and the internet ... role of libraries ... conclusion |
| 32 | Education and women | The Role of a Teacher | Argumentative | Introduction ... teacher as a nation builder ... qualities of a good teacher ... problems of teachers in Pakistan ... respect for teachers ... conclusion |
| 33 | Health and sports | The Importance of Sports | Argumentative | Introduction ... physical benefits ... mental and moral benefits ... sports in Pakistan (cricket, hockey, squash) ... lack of facilities ... suggestions ... conclusion |
| 34 | Health and sports | Health and Hygiene | Argumentative | Introduction ... cleanliness in Islam ... personal hygiene ... public cleanliness ... diseases from dirt ... role of citizens and government ... conclusion |
| 35 | Places | Tourism in Pakistan | Discursive | Introduction ... tourist attractions (north, historic sites, beaches) ... benefits to the economy ... problems ... measures to promote tourism ... future prospects |
| 36 | Places | A Visit to the Northern Areas | Descriptive | Introduction ... journey ... general description ... physical features ... people and culture ... personal feelings ... conclusion |
| 37 | Places | A Historic Place: Mohenjo-daro | Descriptive | Introduction ... general description ... physical features (streets, Great Bath, drains) ... atmosphere ... cultural and human elements ... personal experience ... conclusion/future prospects |
| 38 | Places | My Village | Descriptive | Introduction ... location and general description ... fields and physical features ... daily life and people ... changes over the years ... what makes it special ... conclusion |
| 39 | Places | My Favourite Season: Spring | Descriptive | Introduction ... general description ... sights, sounds and smells ... festivals and activities ... personal feelings ... conclusion |
| 40 | Economy | Entrepreneurship: The Way to Self-Reliance | Argumentative | Introduction and meaning ... qualities of an entrepreneur ... role in the economy ... Pakistani success stories ... problems faced ... support needed ... conclusion |
Report writing (old syllabus Q6)
The old syllabus (Curriculum 2006) paper still sets a report as Q6, for 8 marks. A report is a formal document written after investigating a situation. It tells an authority what was found and what should be done. You are given a role (for example, an analyst or a price control officer) and four aspects to cover.
Format
| Part | What to write |
|---|---|
| To | Designation and office of the person who asked for the report ("The Director, Prices Regulatory Authority, Islamabad") |
| From | Your designation (use A.B.C. or X.Y.Z. for your name) |
| Date | Written in full: 5 March 2026 |
| Subject | One line: "Report on ..." |
| 1. Introduction | Who asked for the report, the purpose, and how you investigated (visits, interviews, records) |
| 2 to 5. Findings | One numbered heading for each aspect in the question, in the given order |
| 6. Conclusion | Two or three sentences summing up what the findings mean |
| 7. Recommendations | 4 to 6 numbered suggestions, each beginning with an action ("The Authority should ...") |
| Signature | Name (A.B.C.) and designation |
Language of a report
- Formal and objective; first person only where needed ("I visited ...").
- Past tense for what you did and found ("Prices rose ...", "Several wholesalers were found ...").
- "Should" for recommendations ("The government should ...").
- Short numbered points under headings; no quotations, no emotional language.
- About 250 to 350 words for 8 marks.
To: The Principal, A.B.C. College, Islamabad
From: A.B.C., Head Boy
Date: 15 October 2026
Subject: Report on the condition of the college canteen
1. Introduction: As directed by you, I visited the canteen three times last week, at different hours, and spoke to twenty students and the canteen staff.
2. Cleanliness: The serving counter was clean, but the washing area was dirty and flies were seen near open food.
3. Prices: Most prices were reasonable, but samosas and juices cost about 20 percent more than in nearby shops.
4. Quality of food: Tea and sandwiches were fresh, but oil was reused for frying several times.
5. Conclusion: The canteen is useful but needs better hygiene and fair prices.
6. Recommendations: (i) Food should be kept covered. (ii) A price list approved by the college should be displayed. (iii) Frying oil should be changed daily. (iv) A teacher should inspect the canteen every week.
A.B.C., Head Boy
Key terms
- Essay
- A piece of continuous writing on one topic, organised in paragraphs. In Q4 it is about 250-300 words and expands a given outline.
- Outline
- The list of points printed under the topic. It is the examiner's checklist: cover every point, in order.
- Hook
- The opening sentence of an essay that catches the reader's interest: a striking fact, a statement, a short quotation or an anecdote.
- Anecdote
- A very short true-to-life story (one or two sentences) used as a hook or an example.
- Background
- The sentences between the hook and the thesis that define the key term or give the context.
- Thesis statement
- One sentence, the last in the introduction, that states the main idea of the essay or the writer's position.
- Topic sentence
- The first sentence of a body paragraph; it states the paragraph's main idea, ideally using the outline's words.
- Paragraph point
- The main idea of one paragraph, written in a few words in the plan.
- Linking sentence
- The last sentence of a body paragraph; it closes the idea or leads to the next paragraph.
- Conclusion
- The final paragraph: the thesis restated in new words, a solution or hope for the future, and a strong last line.
- Coherence
- The logical order and clear connection of ideas, so the essay makes sense as a whole.
- Cohesion
- The joining of sentences and paragraphs with linking words, pronouns and repeated key words.
- Transitional device
- A linking word or phrase (however, moreover, as a result) that shows the relationship between ideas.
- Mechanics
- Spelling, punctuation, capital letters and handwriting.
- Formal register
- The serious, impersonal style used in essays and reports: no slang, no contractions, no text-message spelling.
- Contraction
- A shortened form such as don't, can't or it's; avoided in formal writing.
- Descriptive essay
- An essay that paints a picture of a place, person, object or event with sensory details, moving from general to specific.
- Sensory detail
- A detail that appeals to one of the five senses: sight, sound, smell, touch or taste.
- Argumentative essay
- An essay that takes a clear position and supports it with reasons and evidence, answering the opposing view.
- Discursive essay
- An essay that discusses both sides of an issue fairly and gives a reasoned view at the end.
- Claim
- The position an argumentative essay defends, stated in the thesis.
- Evidence
- Facts, examples, figures or quotations that support a reason.
- Counterclaim
- The opposing view, stated fairly inside an argumentative essay.
- Rebuttal
- The writer's answer to a counterclaim, showing why it is weaker.
- Report
- A formal document, written after an investigation, that presents findings under headings and makes recommendations (old syllabus Q6).
- Findings
- The facts discovered during an investigation, given under numbered headings in a report.
- Recommendations
- Numbered practical suggestions at the end of a report, usually with "should".
Paper-style essays for practice
Four more likely topics, each written as a full-mark answer. Plan each one yourself in 3 minutes first, then compare.
Social Media: A Blessing or a Curse
Outline: Introduction ... Uses of social media ... Harmful effects ... Views of critics ... Responsible use ... Conclusion
Social Media: A Blessing or a Curse
Today, a student in a small town of Balochistan can talk to a friend in Karachi, watch a lecture from Harvard and share her poem with the world, all within minutes. This is the power of social media: websites and apps such as Facebook, YouTube, WhatsApp and TikTok that allow people to create and share content. In my view, social media is a blessing, provided it is used wisely.
Social media has many uses. It keeps families connected, especially those whose members work abroad. Students use YouTube and online groups to learn difficult topics free of cost. Small businesses, from home bakers to clothing brands, advertise and sell their products online. During floods and emergencies, social media spreads information and collects donations quickly.
However, it has harmful effects too. Many young people spend hours scrolling, which wastes time and harms their studies and sleep. Fake news spreads faster than the truth, and cyberbullying hurts people's mental health. Some users share private pictures and information without thinking of the danger.
Critics argue that social media should be banned for young people because its dangers outweigh its benefits. This argument, however, ignores the fact that the fault lies in misuse, not in the tool itself. A knife can cut vegetables or hurt someone; we do not ban knives but teach people to use them safely.
Responsible use is therefore the answer. Users should limit their screen time, check news before sharing it and protect their personal data. Parents and teachers should guide children, and laws such as the Prevention of Electronic Crimes Act must be used against online harassment.
In conclusion, social media is a powerful servant but a dangerous master. If we control it instead of letting it control us, it will remain a blessing for our society.
Word count: 297 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): striking statement hook, definition, thesis with a clear stance.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Uses of social media): reasons with examples.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Harmful effects): the problems admitted honestly.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Views of critics): counterclaim, then rebuttal.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Responsible use): what users, parents and the state should do.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion): restated thesis, strong last line.
Climate Change and Pakistan
Outline: Introduction ... Causes ... Effects on Pakistan ... Measures ... Conclusion
Climate Change and Pakistan
In the summer of 2022, nearly one-third of Pakistan went under water, and more than thirty million people were affected by floods. This disaster was a warning of climate change: the long-term change in the earth's temperature and weather patterns, caused mainly by human activities. Although Pakistan produces less than one percent of the world's greenhouse gases, it is among the countries most at risk from climate change.
The main cause of climate change is the burning of coal, oil and gas, which releases carbon dioxide into the air. This gas traps heat and slowly warms the planet. Deforestation makes the problem worse, because fewer trees are left to absorb carbon dioxide. Smoke from vehicles, factories and brick kilns adds to the pollution in our cities.
The effects on Pakistan are already visible. Heavy monsoon rains cause deadly floods, while cities like Jacobabad suffer from extreme heatwaves. Glaciers in the northern areas are melting faster, which threatens our rivers in the long run. Changing weather also damages crops such as wheat and cotton, putting food security at risk.
Several measures can reduce the damage. The government should invest in solar, wind and hydroelectric power instead of imported fuel. Tree-planting drives like the Ten Billion Tree Tsunami must be continued and protected. Better dams and early-warning systems can save lives during floods. Citizens, too, can help by saving energy, using public transport and planting trees.
In conclusion, climate change is no longer a distant threat; it is knocking at our door. Pakistan cannot stop it alone, but it can prepare, adapt and demand fair support from the rich countries that caused most of the pollution. The earth is our only home, and protecting it is the duty of every generation.
Word count: 289 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): striking fact hook, definition, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Causes): human causes, global and local.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Effects on Pakistan): floods, heat, glaciers, food.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Measures): government, industry and citizens.
- Paragraph 5: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion): restated thesis, future hope, strong last line.
Water Crisis in Pakistan
Outline: Introduction ... Causes ... Effects ... Solutions ... Conclusion
Water Crisis in Pakistan
Benjamin Franklin wrote, "When the well's dry, we know the worth of water." Pakistan is fast approaching that moment. Once rich in rivers, it now has far less water for each person than it had at independence, and experts warn that it is close to the level of water scarcity. The water crisis is a silent emergency that threatens our farms, our health and our future.
There are several causes of this crisis. The population has grown rapidly, so the same rivers must now serve many more people. Pakistan has built too few dams, and its large reservoirs can store water for only about a month. Old canals leak, and farmers still flood their fields instead of using modern methods. Climate change is also making rainfall less regular.
The effects are serious. Agriculture, the backbone of our economy, suffers when canals run dry. In cities like Karachi, people buy water from tankers at high prices. Where clean water is not available, people drink polluted water and fall ill with diseases such as diarrhoea and hepatitis. Women and children in dry areas walk for hours to fetch a few pots of water.
The crisis can be solved with planning. New dams such as Diamer-Bhasha and Mohmand must be completed quickly. Farmers should be helped to adopt drip and sprinkler irrigation. Rainwater harvesting should be made compulsory in new buildings, and old pipelines should be repaired. At home, every citizen can save water by closing taps and reporting leaks.
In conclusion, water is life, and wasting it is wasting our future. If the government and the people act together now, Pakistan can turn this crisis into a story of wise management. Every drop saved today is a drop of hope for tomorrow.
Word count: 290 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): quotation hook (Franklin), background, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Causes): four causes.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Effects): farming, health, cities.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Solutions): storage, farming, homes.
- Paragraph 5: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion): restated thesis, strong last line.
The Habit of Reading
Outline: Introduction ... Increases knowledge ... Broadens vision ... Positive use of time ... Books and the internet ... Conclusion
The Habit of Reading
Francis Bacon wrote, "Reading maketh a full man." The habit of reading means reading regularly for knowledge and pleasure, not only for examinations. In an age of short videos and endless scrolling, this habit is becoming rare among our youth, yet it remains one of the best habits a student can develop.
Reading increases knowledge like nothing else. Books take us to places we have never visited and introduce us to people who lived centuries ago. Regular readers also build a rich vocabulary and learn to write clear and correct English, which helps them in every examination and later in their careers.
Reading also broadens our vision. When we read the lives of great people such as Quaid-e-Azam or Abdul Sattar Edhi, we learn courage, honesty and service. Novels help us understand the feelings of others, and this makes us more tolerant and kind.
Moreover, reading is a positive use of spare time. Instead of wasting hours on gossip or mobile games, a reader spends them with the finest minds in history. Reading also calms the mind, reduces stress and improves concentration, which every student needs.
Some people argue that books are no longer needed because everything is available on the internet. This is only partly true. The internet offers quick facts, but a good book offers deep, organised knowledge. In fact, e-books and online libraries have made serious reading easier than ever.
In conclusion, the habit of reading enriches the mind and the character. Parents should set an example by reading at home, and schools should give every class a weekly library period to revive this habit among the young. A book in hand is a friend that never lets us down.
Word count: 283 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): quotation hook (Bacon), definition, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Increases knowledge): knowledge and language.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Broadens vision): thinking and empathy.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Positive use of time): time and mind.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Books and the internet): counterclaim, then rebuttal.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion): restated thesis, advice, strong last line.
Essay skills practice
Short tasks that practise one skill at a time: planning, hooks, formal style, thesis and conclusion, argument and description.
| Outline point | Paragraph | Paragraph point | Example or fact |
|---|---|---|---|
| Introduction | 1 | Roads carry life, but carelessness turns them into death traps (thesis) | Hook: a striking statement about accidents on the GT Road or a motorway |
| causes of road accidents | 2 | Speeding, one-wheeling, mobile use, poor roads, unfit vehicles | Underage drivers in cities |
| effects | 3 | Deaths, disability, loss to families and economy | A family losing its only earner |
| traffic rules | 4 | Speed limits, seat belts, helmets, lane discipline | Helmet rule for motorcyclists |
| role of police, drivers and pedestrians | 5 | Fair enforcement; careful driving; zebra crossings and overhead bridges | Motorway Police as a model of honest enforcement |
| conclusion | 6 | Safety is a shared duty; strong last line | "Better late than never" used as a closing line |
Six outline points give six paragraphs of about 50 words, in the printed order, with the outline's words in each topic sentence.
| Hook type | Hook |
|---|---|
| Striking fact | Pakistan's large dams can store water for only about a month, while many other countries can store it for far longer. |
| Statement | Water is the one resource that no nation can import in the quantities it needs. |
| Short quotation | Benjamin Franklin wrote, "When the well's dry, we know the worth of water." |
| Anecdote | Last summer, our neighbours in Karachi waited three days for a water tanker, while the tap in their kitchen stayed dry. |
Formal version: In recent years, many children have stopped reading books because they spend most of their free time on mobile phones. This is a serious problem. Parents often feel helpless, but they can set limits on screen time and read with their children. Schools, too, can revive the habit through weekly library periods.
| Informal | Formal | Rule |
|---|---|---|
| Nowadays kids | In recent years, many children | No slang (kids) |
| don't, they're, It's, can't | do not, they are, It is, cannot (or rephrased) | No contractions |
| coz | because | No text-message spelling |
| a really big problem | a serious problem | Formal vocabulary |
| etc. | removed; real examples given instead | No "etc." |
| What should we do? | a statement with solutions | No rhetorical questions |
Thesis (last sentence of the introduction): Inflation has become one of the heaviest burdens on ordinary Pakistani families, and it can be controlled only through firm economic planning and honest enforcement.
Conclusion: In conclusion, rising prices are not a problem of the poor alone; they weaken the whole economy. If the government controls hoarding, increases local production and protects the most vulnerable, prices can become stable again. A stable economy is the foundation of a peaceful society.
- The conclusion restates the thesis in new words ("not a problem of the poor alone").
- It offers a solution and a hope for the future.
- It ends with a short, strong last line.
Supporters of online learning argue that it is cheaper and more flexible, because students can study at any time and from any place. This is partly true, but it ignores the reality of many Pakistani students, who lack fast internet, a quiet room or a personal device. Moreover, a screen cannot replace the discipline of a classroom or the guidance of a teacher who notices when a student is confused. Online learning, therefore, is a useful support, not a replacement.
- Sentence 1: the counterclaim, stated fairly ("Supporters of online learning argue that ...").
- Sentence 2: the rebuttal begins by admitting a part of it ("This is partly true, but ...") and gives Pakistani evidence.
- Sentence 3: a further reason ("Moreover, ...").
- Sentence 4: a linking sentence that returns to the claim.
On the evening before Eid, Raja Bazaar in Rawalpindi was bursting with life. Colourful bangles glittered under long rows of bulbs, and shopkeepers shouted their prices above the endless honking of motorcycles. The aroma of fresh jalebis and spicy chaat drifted through the narrow lanes, while shoppers pushed past one another with bags of new clothes and shoes.
| Sense | Words used |
|---|---|
| Sight | colourful bangles glittered, long rows of bulbs |
| Sound | shopkeepers shouted, endless honking |
| Smell | aroma of fresh jalebis and spicy chaat |
| Touch | shoppers pushed past one another |
FBISE paper questions
Questions from the FBISE HSSC-II 2026 (1st Annual) papers, the old-syllabus paper and FBISE model papers that belong to this unit, answered the way an examiner expects.
Youth Unemployment
Outline: What is unemployment? ..... Current conditions of youth ..... Areas where youth are struggling .... Causes of youth unemployment .... Measures required .... Future prospects.
Youth Unemployment
Every year, thousands of young Pakistanis leave universities with degrees in their hands, but many cannot find work. Unemployment is a condition in which a person who is able and willing to work cannot find a job. When the young are unemployed, a nation wastes its greatest asset. Youth unemployment is, therefore, one of the most serious challenges facing Pakistan today.
Pakistan is one of the youngest countries in the world, as nearly two-thirds of its people are under thirty. Yet many young people are either jobless or working far below their qualifications. Many graduates spend years sending applications, and frustration is spreading.
Young people are struggling in several areas. Firstly, they cannot find jobs that match their degrees. Secondly, many lack practical skills such as computer use and communication. Thirdly, those in villages have few opportunities outside farming. Moreover, young women face extra barriers, such as limited mobility.
The causes of youth unemployment are deep-rooted. Our education system produces degree holders rather than skilled workers, so what students learn does not match what employers need. In addition, slow economic growth and rapid population increase have reduced the number of new jobs. Nepotism in hiring also denies talent a fair chance.
Serious measures are required. The government should link education with the job market by expanding vocational training through bodies such as NAVTTC. Free online programmes like DigiSkills can train young people in freelancing. Easy loans can help them start small businesses, and merit must be the only standard in recruitment.
In conclusion, our youth can have a bright future if their energy is directed wisely. With skills and fair opportunities, today's jobless graduates can become tomorrow's job creators. As Allama Iqbal reminds us, "Sitaron se aage jahan aur bhi hain": there are worlds beyond the stars. A nation that invests in its youth invests in its own future.
Word count: 309 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: What is unemployment?): hook, definition, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Current conditions of youth): the present situation.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Areas where youth are struggling): three areas, listed with Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Causes of youth unemployment): causes with reasons.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Measures required): solutions with Pakistani examples (NAVTTC, DigiSkills).
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Future prospects): restated thesis, future hope, Iqbal's line as the strong ending.
Note. The other topic in this question was "The Most Historic Place I Have Visited"; its model essay is also in this section.
The Most Historic Place I Have Visited
Outline: Introduction ... General Description ... Physical Features .... Atmosphere and Environment ... Cultural and Human Elements ... Personal Experience/Feelings ... Conclusion/Future Prospects
The Most Historic Place I Have Visited
Some places are made of stone, yet they speak like books. The Lahore Fort, known locally as the Shahi Qila, is one such place. Last winter, I visited it with my class and felt as if I had walked into the pages of history. Of all the places I have seen, the Lahore Fort is the most historic.
The fort stands at the northern edge of the Walled City of Lahore. Its present form was built mainly by the Mughal emperors, especially Akbar, Jahangir, Shah Jahan and Aurangzeb. In 1981, UNESCO declared it a World Heritage Site together with the Shalimar Gardens.
The fort covers a vast area enclosed by massive walls of brick. Visitors enter through the grand Alamgiri Gate, built by Aurangzeb. Inside are marble halls, green lawns and elegant pavilions. The most famous is the Sheesh Mahal, or Palace of Mirrors, whose ceiling is covered with tiny pieces of glass that sparkle like stars. The long Picture Wall shows elephants and horsemen in colourful tiles.
The atmosphere and environment of the fort are calm and majestic. Pigeons flutter over the courtyards, and a cool breeze blows. Its cultural and human side is equally rich. Just outside stand the Badshahi Mosque, the tomb of Allama Iqbal and the Minar-e-Pakistan, so the whole area feels like a living museum. Families and foreign tourists listen as guides tell stories of Mughal kings.
Standing inside the Sheesh Mahal, I was deeply moved. I imagined Shah Jahan holding court there nearly four hundred years ago. I felt proud of the skill of our ancestors, but I also felt sad to see names scratched on some ancient walls.
In conclusion, the Lahore Fort is a treasure of our history and culture, and its future depends on us. If restoration work continues and visitors respect its walls, this great monument will keep telling its story to generations yet to come.
Word count: 316 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): hook (a striking statement), the place named, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: General Description): location, builders, status.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Physical Features): sight details, from the gate to the halls inside.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Atmosphere and Environment ... Cultural and Human Elements): sound and touch details, then the people and nearby landmarks.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Personal Experience/Feelings): what I felt, in the first person.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion/Future Prospects): restated thesis, future of the monument, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "Youth Unemployment"; its model essay is also in this section.
Women Empowerment
Outline: What is empowerment... Current conditions of women... Areas where women are struggling- education, financial independence, health and politics... Measures required to restore women to a respectable status... Future prospects.
Women Empowerment
Quaid-e-Azam once said, "No nation can rise to the height of glory unless your women are side by side with you." Empowerment means giving people the power and resources to make decisions about their own lives. Women empowerment, therefore, means that women can learn, earn and take part in public life as equals. For Pakistan, it is not a choice but a necessity.
The current conditions of women present a mixed picture. On the one hand, women serve as doctors, pilots and judges, and Benazir Bhutto became the first woman prime minister of a Muslim country. On the other hand, millions of women, especially in villages, still live without education, income or a voice. Pakistan ranks near the bottom of the Global Gender Gap Index.
Women are struggling in several areas. In education, many girls leave school early because of poverty, long distances and early marriage. In terms of financial independence, most women depend on male relatives for money, and many work in fields and homes without any pay.
Health is another area of concern. Poor nutrition and a shortage of trained midwives put many mothers at risk during childbirth. In politics, although sixty seats are reserved for women in the National Assembly, few women hold real power.
Several measures are required to restore women to a respectable status. Girls' schools should be built closer to villages. The Benazir Income Support Programme and small loans can help women earn and save. Laws against harassment must be enforced strictly. Above all, society must accept that Islam gives women the right to education, property and respect.
The future prospects are encouraging. Malala Yousafzai, Arfa Karim and Samina Baig have shown the world what Pakistani women can achieve. With equal opportunities, women will change not only their own lives but also the fortunes of the nation. An empowered woman builds an empowered nation.
Word count: 310 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: What is empowerment): quotation hook, definition, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Current conditions of women): both sides of the picture.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Areas where women are struggling: education, financial independence): the first two areas.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: ... health and politics): the other two areas.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Measures required to restore women to a respectable status): solutions with Pakistani examples.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Future prospects): role models, future hope, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "The most beautiful place on earth"; its model essay is also in this section.
The most beautiful place on earth
Outline: Introduction.... General Description... Physical Features .... Atmosphere and Environment ... Cultural and Human Elements... Personal Experience/Feelings... Conclusion/Future Prospects
The Most Beautiful Place on Earth
John Keats wrote, "A thing of beauty is a joy for ever." Whenever I remember the Hunza Valley in Gilgit-Baltistan, I understand those words. I have seen many lovely places, but for me, Hunza is the most beautiful place on earth.
Hunza lies in the far north of Pakistan along the Karakoram Highway, surrounded by some of the highest mountains in the world. Its main towns, Karimabad and Aliabad, sit on terraced slopes above the Hunza River. The valley can be reached by road from Islamabad in about two days.
The physical features of Hunza are breathtaking. Snow-capped peaks such as Rakaposhi and Ultar tower over green fields and orchards of apricots, cherries and apples. In spring, the whole valley turns pink and white with blossoms. Further up the valley lies Attabad Lake, whose turquoise water shines like a precious stone.
The atmosphere and environment are peaceful and pure. The air is crisp, the streams are crystal-clear, and the silence is broken only by the sound of water and birds. The cultural and human elements are equally charming. The people are educated, polite and hospitable, and they speak languages such as Burushaski and Wakhi. Ancient forts like Baltit and Altit tell stories of the old rulers of Hunza, the Mirs.
When I visited Hunza with my family, I stood on the terrace of Baltit Fort at sunset and watched Rakaposhi turn golden and then pink. At that moment, I forgot the noise and stress of city life. I felt calm, grateful and closer to my Creator.
In conclusion, Hunza is a gift of nature and a jewel of Pakistan. Its future depends on responsible tourism. If visitors keep it clean and the government protects its environment, this paradise will remain beautiful for generations to come.
Word count: 295 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): quotation hook (Keats), the place named, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: General Description): where it is and how to reach it.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Physical Features): sight details, from the peaks down to the lake.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Atmosphere and Environment ... Cultural and Human Elements): sound, touch and people.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Personal Experience/Feelings): one moment, described with feeling.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion/Future Prospects): restated thesis, responsible tourism, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "Women Empowerment"; its model essay is also in this section.
Digital Literacy and Economic Empowerment
Outline: Defining Digital Literacy...... Closing the gap....... The Global Marketplace.... Government & Private initiatives.... Future Prospects/Conclusion
Digital Literacy and Economic Empowerment
In the twenty-first century, a smartphone can be a shop, a classroom and an office at the same time. Digital literacy is the ability to use digital devices and the internet to find, judge, create and share information safely and wisely. It includes skills such as using email, searching online, protecting personal data and spotting fake news. Today, digital literacy has become a key to economic empowerment.
However, a wide digital gap still exists in Pakistan. Many people in rural areas cannot afford smartphones or reliable internet, and women are far less likely than men to use mobile internet. Closing this gap means providing cheap internet, computer labs in schools and basic training for those left behind. Without these steps, technology will make the rich richer and leave the poor further behind.
Once the gap is closed, the global marketplace opens its doors. A young graduate in Multan can design logos for a company in London, and a woman in Swat can sell handmade shawls to customers all over the country through online stores. Pakistan has already become one of the fastest-growing freelance markets in the world. In this way, digital skills turn talent into income without the need to migrate.
Both government and private initiatives are helping. The government's DigiSkills.pk programme has trained large numbers of young people in freelancing, graphic design and digital marketing free of cost. Software technology parks and national incubation centres support new start-ups. Private companies and universities also offer online courses, while e-commerce platforms such as Daraz allow small sellers to reach millions of customers.
In conclusion, digital literacy is no longer a luxury; it is a basic survival skill. If every young Pakistani learns to use technology productively, the country can increase its IT exports, reduce unemployment and empower women and villagers alike. A digitally literate nation is an economically strong nation.
Word count: 309 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Defining Digital Literacy): striking statement hook, definition, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Closing the gap): the digital divide and how to close it.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: The Global Marketplace): how digital skills earn money, with Pakistani examples.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Government & Private initiatives): named programmes on both sides.
- Paragraph 5: Conclusion (outline: Future Prospects/Conclusion): restated thesis, future benefits, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "Drug addiction among youth"; its model essay is also in this section.
Drug addiction among youth
Outline: Introduction ... Causes ... Adverse effects on Physical and Mental Health .... Impact on Education and Career ... Social and Economic consequences ... Preventive measures and solution .... Conclusion/Future Prospects
Drug Addiction among Youth
Drug addiction is a slow poison that destroys the addict, the family and the nation. According to a UNODC survey published in 2013, about 6.7 million Pakistanis use drugs, and many of them are young. Drug addiction among youth is therefore a serious threat to Pakistan's future.
There are many causes of this evil. Peer pressure and curiosity lead many young people to try drugs for the first time. Others turn to drugs to escape stress, family problems, unemployment or exam pressure. The easy availability of drugs, including "ice", near some schools and colleges makes the problem worse.
Drugs have terrible effects on physical and mental health. They damage the brain, lungs, heart and liver, and shared needles spread diseases such as HIV and hepatitis. Mentally, addicts suffer from anxiety, depression, memory loss and mood swings. In severe cases, an overdose can cause death.
Addiction also ruins education and career. Addicted students lose interest in their studies, miss classes and fail examinations. Later, they cannot keep a steady job because they are unreliable and unhealthy. In this way, a bright future is exchanged for a moment of false pleasure.
The social and economic consequences are equally serious. Addicts often turn to theft and crime to pay for drugs, and their families suffer shame, conflict and financial ruin. The state spends large sums on treatment and law enforcement, while the nation loses productive young workers.
Preventive measures must begin at home. Parents should give time to their children and notice changes in their behaviour. Schools should teach drug education and refusal skills. The Anti-Narcotics Force must cut off the supply, and affordable rehabilitation centres should treat addicts as patients, not criminals.
In conclusion, drug addiction is a preventable disaster. If families, schools, the media and the state work together, Pakistan's youth can be saved from this menace. A drug-free youth will build a healthy, strong and prosperous Pakistan.
Word count: 317 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): striking fact hook (UNODC survey), thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Causes): four causes.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Adverse effects on Physical and Mental Health): body first, then mind.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Impact on Education and Career): studies first, then jobs.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Social and Economic consequences): family, society, state.
- Paragraph 6: Body 5 (outline: Preventive measures and solution): home, school, state.
- Paragraph 7: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion/Future Prospects): restated thesis, joint effort, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "Digital Literacy and Economic Empowerment"; its model essay is also in this section.
The Role of Education in National Progress
Outline: Introduction ------ Importance of education ------ Teacher and civilization ------ Need of a nation ------ Moral, social and technical development ------ Impact of education on the fortunes of nations ------ Conclusion.
The Role of Education in National Progress
Nelson Mandela called education "the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world." Education is not merely reading books and passing examinations; it is the process that trains the mind, builds character and prepares people for life. No nation in history has progressed without it.
The importance of education can hardly be overstated. Islam makes seeking knowledge a duty for every Muslim, and the first word revealed to the Holy Prophet (PBUH) was "Iqra", which means "Read". Education teaches people to think clearly, earn a respectable living and know their rights and duties.
Teachers are the architects of civilization. Just as a builder shapes bricks into a building, a teacher shapes young minds into responsible citizens. Great civilizations, from Baghdad in the age of the Abbasids to modern Europe, rose on the work of scholars and teachers. When teachers are respected and well trained, society flourishes.
Every nation needs educated doctors, engineers, scientists and honest leaders, and only education can provide them. Education brings moral development by teaching honesty, tolerance and discipline. It brings social development by reducing crime, poverty and discrimination. It also drives technical development, because modern industry, agriculture and information technology all depend on trained minds.
The impact of education on the fortunes of nations is clear from history. Japan was ruined in the Second World War, yet it became an economic giant by investing in education and technology. South Korea, once one of the poorest countries in Asia, followed the same path. On the other hand, nations with low literacy remain trapped in poverty and dependence.
In conclusion, education is the backbone of national progress. Pakistan, where the literacy rate is still only about sixty percent, must spend more on schools, teachers and technical training. The Constitution promises free education to every child from five to sixteen. If we keep this promise, we will build a strong and prosperous nation.
Word count: 317 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): quotation hook (Mandela), definition, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Importance of education): religious and practical importance.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Teacher and civilization): the teacher's role, with a historical example.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Need of a nation ... Moral, social and technical development): what a nation needs, then the three kinds of development.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Impact of education on the fortunes of nations): evidence from Japan and South Korea, then the contrast.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: Conclusion): restated thesis, what Pakistan must do, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "Rural vs Urban Life"; its model essay is also in this section.
Rural vs Urban Life
Outline: Introduction ------ Comparison of life styles ------ Difference of living standards ----- Economic life ------ attraction in rural life ------ Why people move to cities? ------ conclusion.
Rural vs Urban Life
Pakistan lives in two worlds: the quiet villages of Punjab and Sindh, and the crowded cities of Karachi and Lahore. Rural life is life in villages, close to fields and nature, while urban life is life in cities, close to markets and modern facilities. A fair comparison shows that each has its own charms and problems.
The lifestyles of the two are very different. Villagers rise early, work in the fields and sleep soon after sunset. Their life is simple and tied to the seasons. City dwellers, on the other hand, live by the clock. They rush to offices, spend hours in traffic and often stay awake late.
There is also a wide difference in living standards. Cities offer better hospitals, universities and clean drinking water, while many villages still lack these basic facilities. Economic life follows the same pattern. Most villagers depend on farming, and their income rises and falls with the weather. Cities offer a variety of jobs, although living costs are much higher.
Yet rural life has its own attraction. The air is fresh, the food is pure, and the green fields soothe the eyes. People know one another, share each other's joys and sorrows, and live with strong family bonds. There is little noise, pollution or crime.
People move to cities for several reasons. The main attractions are jobs, better schools and modern health care. Floods and small landholdings also push farmers out of their villages. According to the 2023 census, nearly two out of five Pakistanis now live in urban areas, and cities keep growing.
In conclusion, both rural and urban life have advantages and disadvantages. The best solution is to bring city facilities such as schools, hospitals and small industries to the villages, so that people do not have to leave their homes. Balanced development of villages and cities will make Pakistan truly prosperous.
Word count: 310 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction): striking statement hook, the two terms defined, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Comparison of life styles): village routine against city routine.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Difference of living standards ... Economic life): facilities first, then income.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: attraction in rural life): what villages do better.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: Why people move to cities?): push and pull reasons, census evidence.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: conclusion): balanced view, solution, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "The Role of Education in National Progress"; its model essay is also in this section.
- (i) Importance of the holy month of Ramadan and fasting.
- (ii) Increased prices of goods, specially eatables.
- (iii) Hoarding of eatables to artificially created shortage.
- (iv) Suggestions to control prices during Ramdan.
To: The Director, Prices Regulatory Authority, Islamabad
From: A.B.C., Analyst, Prices Regulatory Authority
Date: 12 March 2026
Subject: Report on the rising prices of eatables during Ramadan
1. Introduction
As directed by you, I investigated the rise in the prices of eatables during the holy month of Ramadan. I visited wholesale markets, retail shops and Ramadan bazaars in Islamabad and Rawalpindi, compared current prices with those of the previous month, and interviewed shopkeepers, wholesalers and consumers. My findings are given below.
2. Importance of the holy month of Ramadan and fasting
Ramadan is the holiest month of the Islamic calendar. Muslims fast from dawn to sunset, which teaches self-control, patience and sympathy for the poor. It is a month of worship, charity and sharing. Because of sehri and iftar, the demand for dates, fruit, flour, gram flour, sugar and cooking oil rises sharply.
3. Increased prices of goods, especially eatables
Prices rose sharply in the first week of Ramadan. Fruit, dates, tomatoes, onions, chicken and gram flour were the most affected, and some items cost 30 to 50 percent more than a month earlier. Many shops did not display the official price list, and some shopkeepers charged different customers different prices.
4. Hoarding of eatables to create an artificial shortage
Several wholesalers had stored large quantities of sugar, flour, gram flour and dates in godowns before Ramadan. They released small amounts into the market to create an artificial shortage and then sold at higher rates. Weak and irregular checking by price magistrates encouraged this practice.
5. Conclusion
The rise in prices is caused less by a real shortage than by profiteering and hoarding. It hurts low-income and middle-class families most and goes against the very spirit of Ramadan.
6. Suggestions to control prices during Ramadan
- Price magistrates should make daily surprise visits and fine or seal shops that overcharge.
- Official price lists should be displayed in every shop and announced daily in the media.
- Godowns should be inspected before Ramadan, and hoarded stock should be seized under the law.
- Government Ramadan bazaars should sell essential items at subsidised rates.
- A helpline should be provided so that consumers can report overcharging immediately.
- Religious scholars and the media should remind traders that profiteering in Ramadan is a sin.
A.B.C.
Analyst, Prices Regulatory Authority
Note. Transcribed as printed, including "your" with a small letter, "artificially created shortage" and "Ramdan". In the answer, the headings use correct forms ("to create an artificial shortage", "Ramadan").
My Native Town
Outline: Introduction: Introduction of your native town … Body: physical features, places of interest / landmarks… your past memories associated with the town… people and culture… changes over the years… Conclusion: summarizing what makes your native town so special and memorable to you.
My Native Town
Every person carries a small piece of home in the heart. For me, that home is Abbottabad, a green and peaceful town in the Hazara region of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa. It was founded in 1853 and named after James Abbott, a British officer. Although I now study in Islamabad, my heart still belongs to my native town.
Abbottabad lies in a wide valley surrounded by pine-covered hills, and its climate is pleasant for most of the year. Summers are mild, and winters sometimes bring snow. Its famous landmarks include Shimla Hill, which offers a view of the whole town, the Ilyasi Mosque with its natural spring, and the Pakistan Military Academy at Kakul, which trains the officers of our army.
I have many sweet memories of this town. As a child, I climbed Shimla Hill with my cousins every Eid and raced them to the top. On rainy evenings, my father took us to the Ilyasi Mosque, where we ate hot pakoras beside the cold, clear stream. These small moments still bring a smile to my face.
The people of Abbottabad are simple, hospitable and hard-working. Most of them speak Hindko, and they welcome guests with warm tea and generous meals. The town is also known for its good schools and colleges, so education is valued in almost every home.
Over the years, Abbottabad has changed a great deal. The Hazara Motorway has made travel faster, and new markets, restaurants and housing schemes have appeared. However, heavy traffic, the cutting of trees and rising pollution have taken away some of its old charm.
In conclusion, Abbottabad is special to me because of its natural beauty, its kind people and the happy memories of my childhood. I hope its forests and streams will be protected for the next generation. Wherever I go, it will remain the place my heart calls home.
Word count: 309 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: Introduction of your native town): hook, name, location, one fact, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: physical features, places of interest / landmarks): setting and climate, then three landmarks.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: your past memories associated with the town): two specific memories.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: people and culture): language, hospitality, values.
- Paragraph 5: Body 4 (outline: changes over the years): good changes, then bad ones.
- Paragraph 6: Conclusion (outline: summarizing what makes your native town so special and memorable to you): three reasons, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "Uses and Abuses of Artificial Intelligence"; its model essay is also in this section.
Uses and Abuses of Artificial Intelligence
Outline: Introduction: AI and its significance… Body: Benefits in healthcare, business, education etc. ... Job loss, privacy issues, ethical concerns, etc. … Addressing concerns and proposing solutions… Conclusion: Emphasizing responsible use and regulation of AI.
Uses and Abuses of Artificial Intelligence
Artificial intelligence (AI) is the ability of computers and machines to perform tasks that normally require human intelligence, such as learning, reasoning and understanding language. From the voice assistants in our phones to tools like ChatGPT, AI has entered almost every part of modern life. Like every powerful invention, however, it can be used for great good or for serious harm.
The uses of AI are many. In healthcare, AI systems can read X-rays and scans quickly and help doctors detect diseases such as cancer at an early stage. In business, AI helps banks detect fraud, answers customers round the clock and predicts what people will buy. In education, AI tutors can explain difficult lessons at each student's own pace. Farmers can even use AI-based apps to identify crop diseases.
On the other hand, AI brings serious dangers. Machines may replace workers in offices, factories and call centres, causing job loss. AI systems collect huge amounts of personal data, which raises privacy issues. There are also ethical concerns: deepfake videos can spread lies, students may use AI to cheat, and biased programmes can treat people unfairly. Stephen Hawking even warned that full artificial intelligence "could spell the end of the human race".
These concerns can be addressed with wise planning. Governments should make laws to protect personal data and punish the misuse of AI, as the European Union has done through its AI Act. Pakistan took a step in this direction by approving its first National Artificial Intelligence Policy in 2025. Workers should be retrained in new digital skills, and students must learn to use AI honestly, as a helper rather than a replacement for thinking.
In conclusion, AI is neither a blessing nor a curse in itself; everything depends on how we use it. With responsible use, clear regulation and human values at its centre, AI can become one of the greatest servants of mankind.
Word count: 316 words (title not counted).
Paragraph purposes
- Paragraph 1: Introduction (outline: AI and its significance): definition, everyday examples, thesis.
- Paragraph 2: Body 1 (outline: Benefits in healthcare, business, education): one example for each field named in the outline.
- Paragraph 3: Body 2 (outline: Job loss, privacy issues, ethical concerns): the three abuses in the outline's order, a quotation as evidence.
- Paragraph 4: Body 3 (outline: Addressing concerns and proposing solutions): laws, retraining, honest use.
- Paragraph 5: Conclusion (outline: Emphasizing responsible use and regulation of AI): restated thesis, strong last line.
Note. The other topic in this question was "My Native Town"; its model essay is also in this section.
Exam focus
- A descriptive place essay on the 7-point outline (Introduction ... General Description ... Physical Features ... Atmosphere and Environment ... Cultural and Human Elements ... Personal Experience/Feelings ... Conclusion/Future Prospects). (long)Set in both Set B and Set D in 2026; one prepared place covers the historic place, the beautiful place and my native town.Go to answer
- Youth Unemployment (or Unemployment in Pakistan). (long)Set B 2026; youth and jobs is a framework theme (decent work) and returns often.Go to answer
- Women Empowerment / Female Education. (long)Set D 2026; gender equality is a named framework theme.Go to answer
- Uses and Abuses of Artificial Intelligence / Social Media. (long)Model paper topic; AI and digital media are Grade 12 framework themes.Go to answer
- Drug Addiction among Youth. (long)Set A 2026; drug education is a framework theme.Go to answer
- Digital Literacy and Economic Empowerment / Freelancing. (long)Set A 2026; digital skills link two framework themes (digital media and decent work).Go to answer
- Climate Change and Pakistan / Water Crisis. (long)Not yet set on the new syllabus, but climate action and clean water are framework themes; strong candidates for coming papers.Go to answer
- Plan any outline in 3 minutes: one paragraph per point, outline words as anchors. (short)Content and relevance to the outline is the first share of the 12 marks.Go to answer
- Old syllabus: a formal report on a given situation with four aspects (8 marks). (long)Q6 of the 2026 old-syllabus paper; format plus four aspects plus recommendations.Go to answer